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Michael
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0 posted 2019-12-03 01:25 PM



Hermit


Who is this man, who walks these halls?
Whose shadow flits these shadowed walls
Without pause, nor the grief to mourn
Those dreams in him that died unborn?

How can he just wake up and go
On with his life, without a show
Of emotion upon a face
So long ago brought to disgrace?

Does he not feel a thing at all
As he answers a new life’s call?
Or is this just his race towards death,
Each day one more holding his breath?

Who is this man with show of poise?
Who hears nothing but muddled noise?
Nearsighted stare baffling sense,
Unconcerned of the consequence.

A simple song, rippled through time.
A name whispered in careless rhyme.
As the hermit shuts himself in,
The world, it moves on without him.


Michael Anderson

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Gunslinger
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1 posted 2019-12-03 01:38 PM


He is a bard, as yet, unsung-
With words to help, hid in his tongue
Poetic friend, do not despair-
Nor lose all hope for maiden fair.

On this one thing you can depend-
A lot won’t matter, in the end-
While now some fool may think them trite
We will live on, in what we write.

augustsky
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2 posted 2019-12-03 11:00 PM


Soulfully written Poet Michael,
I've always had a soft spot for hermits.

Sky~

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3 posted 2019-12-04 03:48 PM


Michael...I can relate to this poem very much
Thanks for sharing...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

OwlSA
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4 posted 2019-12-05 05:03 AM


Michael, I wish deeply for you what John and I have.  I believe you can find it.  No matter what you think, you are a good and very kind person as many will attest to.    You just have to know it yourself.  You can do it.  Please forgive me, if I have intruded.  
Poet In Pink
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5 posted 2019-12-05 06:42 PM



~Michael~
Your poetry is always written from the heart and your words always touch this readers heart...
Alana
Michael
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6 posted 2019-12-10 11:28 PM


Thank you all for the kind replies.
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