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augustsky
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midwest US

0 posted 2019-11-30 08:06 PM





Natures Seduction~


No longer silent is the night..
Furious Snow Smothering birch & pine,
Bursts of glorious light in the heart of it all,
Entranced to a tearful stare.

Thunder comes galloping to crash the softness.
Surrounded by this booming orchestration, this
White Force, & as Frightening as it is,
it's just as Exhilarating, one wants to wrap
themselves inside it, let it take you where it may.
Seduced, by Thunder-Snow..

©Augustsky

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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
1 posted 2019-12-02 12:20 PM


Envious of the thunderstorms you must receive where you are.  Having driven coast to coast during the winter and having stayed back east for a while I know it truly doesn't rain in California.  Even having seen some spectacular lightning storms back east, I can only imagine what they must be like with snow flurries involved, and how inviting.
augustsky
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Posts 828
midwest US
2 posted 2019-12-03 11:06 PM


It is pretty Amazing.
Thank you for stopping in Michael.

Sky~


Christmas may be a day of feasting,or Prayer, but always will be a day of Remembrance,a day which we think of everything we have ever Loved.
~Augusta Rundell~

[This message has been edited by augustsky (12-05-2019 01:00 AM).]

soul drifter
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since 2004-09-08
Posts 711
Colorado
3 posted 2019-12-05 12:34 PM


“Thunder comes galloping to crash the softness”

Damn.

Exquisite writing as always.

Poet In Pink
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Posts 1066
MI
4 posted 2019-12-05 06:36 PM



~ Dear Sky ~
Lovely writing as always ~ When I lived in VA. we used to get our share of thunder snow! Your writing fits the experience perfectly. Much enjoyed
Huggerz
Alana
Gunslinger
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 901
TX, USA
5 posted 2019-12-05 06:50 PM


Beautiful tribute to the marvels of nature. and to your tender perceptive heart. Well done.

[This message has been edited by Gunslinger (12-06-2019 01:49 AM).]

augustsky
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Posts 828
midwest US
6 posted 2019-12-08 05:47 PM


Thank you Souls for the endearing reply.

Sky~

Christmas may be a day of feasting,
or Prayer, but always will be a day of Remembrance, in which we think of everything we have ever Loved.
~Agusta

augustsky
Senior Member
Posts 828
midwest US
7 posted 2019-12-08 05:51 PM


Pink-Alana..So good to see you back!
Thanks for looking in, I see you know exactly
what I meant & felt about those thunder-snow-storms.

Sky~

Christmas may be a day of feasting,
or Prayer, but always will be a day of Remembrance, in which we think of everything we have ever Loved.
~Agusta

augustsky
Senior Member
Posts 828
midwest US
8 posted 2019-12-08 05:52 PM


Thanks for this Sweet response GsJohn.

Sky~

Christmas may be a day of feasting,
or Prayer, but always will be a day of Remembrance, in which we think of everything we have ever Loved.
~Agusta

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
9 posted 2019-12-10 05:27 PM


Sky,
Thunder snow is rare here. Your graphic rendition is exhilarating! You rock! ~L

augustsky
Senior Member
Posts 828
midwest US
10 posted 2019-12-10 11:17 PM


Thanks Lori, yes..it is still considered rare, but seems to be a little more frequent
lately.

Appreciate your visits always..
Sky~

Christmas may be a day of feasting,
or Prayer, but Always a day of Remembrance,
when we think of Everything we have
ever Loved.

Agusta Rundell~

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
11 posted 2020-01-02 03:56 AM


I think this is my favorite of yours, augustsky.


jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
12 posted 2020-01-08 09:58 PM


Haven't seen Thunder-snow, although I've seen many of Nature's Thunder-Blast of one type or  another that's had me cowering in the corner down here in S.E.Texas.  Must be awesome, just as you've written.

Much Enjoyed - Look in the mirror for me, say HI YOU!

jimmy

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