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Inspired-8
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0 posted 2019-09-07 09:26 PM


Some say
They're evil
Others bad luck

No way
Inconceivable
You're voodoo struck

Just little panthers
Making their way
Dispelling sorcery romancers
Just wanna eat sleep and play

I profess to all of you
I've always have a soft spot
For felines of darkest hue
Having such moxy others haven't got

Mischief Jinxy Majik
Delilah and Sebastian  
All so fantastic
You're my best friends





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OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
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1 posted 2019-09-08 03:39 AM


Black cats and cats of any colour are one of the most wonderful beings that can happen to anyone.  Love your poem.  You have 6 cats and  Majik went missing, so presumably Majik returned (perhaps not) and you have listed only 5, so one of your cats must be another colour.  I am certain, that if that is the case, then you love the non-black cat as much as all the others, and you are just making a point about the superstitions of two-legged non-cats.  
Inspired-8
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2 posted 2019-09-08 04:51 AM


Thanks for remembering about my Majik no he hasn't returned as of yet but haven't given up hope yes I have 3 tabbies also .

cheers
Vic

Inspired-8

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3 posted 2019-09-08 05:52 AM


Tabbies and all other kitty colours too are very beautiful and just as loveable and loving.  Let's hope that Majik and Django have been stolen/taken in by another person/family (preferably the same person/family, though months apart - perhaps Majik found Django which would make it easier for the person/family to steal/take in Majik) and that they are well, happy, adored and cared for - and that you discover this and that the person/family willingly return/s them to you - or that you let him/her/them keep Majik and Django in special circumstances, but that you can visit them as often as you want to and that they are nearby.  Perhaps they are kept inside and can't come home.  
Inspired-8
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4 posted 2019-09-08 06:32 AM


Yes you must have read my mind everything you mentioned has passed in my thoughts. I searched a 5 mile radius months after in my area posted pix and knocked on 100 doors looking for my babies. I tried and I still look on the internet animal shelters thanks my friend.

cheers
vic

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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5 posted 2019-09-08 09:21 AM


This poem did not disappoint. I think black cats are beautiful! My first encounter with one was as a child on my grandpa's farm. Blacky was very friendly old tom cat willing to be petted. I'm enjoying hearing about your friends. I'm sorry for the distress for the missing. ~L
Inspired-8
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6 posted 2019-09-09 03:04 AM


Thank you Lori glad you enjoyed the poem hopefully they will return thanks again.

Cheers
Victor

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