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Open Poetry #50

Do I deserve my ghosts

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

0 posted 2019-05-23 07:43 PM

Do I deserve my ghosts, those of Mary
And Coraline, who harassed my nights,
Those of people i Don't even know
and stress me on my beach towel,
Those of relatives who drive my heart,
as on an isolated seaside, Those of
Hollywood stars aside my swimming pool,
and many more like Ulysse from Ithacus,
from an unknown odyssey, do I deserve
these ghosts who break my articulations,
feed particular slavery, and deny me skies,
desires of loving you again.

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

1 posted 2019-05-24 02:55 AM

I don't know if we deserve them but we are all haunted by ghosts from the past. Yann. They fit nicely into a poem.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2019-05-24 05:09 AM

Good to read you again Yann,
True, we all have them (ghosts) the goal is to make peace with them so they might rest quietly within us. ~L

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

3 posted 2019-05-25 05:38 PM

thanks Ida , i guess you had pupils ghosts too, like in my poem, your comment is precious
yann

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

4 posted 2019-05-25 05:40 PM

thanks lori, for the precious and acccurate reading

yann

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