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In the Moment
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In the Moment |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere 
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In the moment, at the moment, as I’m writing. More to the truth, I’m in the moment of a moment, to escape with writing the blatant truth. Spelling in the moment, typing in the moment, as I am writing my truth about another moment. And at this moment, in this line in my writing, I find that moment of truth; clarity of the moment, ah ha moment. Writing my truth. Moment, moment, writing truth. LGR(C)4/27/19 |
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augustsky Senior Member Posts 828 midwest US |
Can't Believe No-one has replied to this yet! Gets my back up when people do this. Anyway..I liked this Lori, life is after all made up of many moments..isn't it. Enjoyed the read.. Sky~ ~Don't Quit Your Day Dream~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Bless your heart Sky! Thank you so much for commenting! You made my day! ~L |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
very interesting penning , Lori, you had great inspiration indeed, a moment of a moment makes effect, not only poetical but philosophical , splendid yann |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Thanks Yann, I always like hearing your perspective. ~L |
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Namyh Senior Member
since 2009-01-20
Posts 988 |
Lori – The same well where we poets keep our experiences is the same one from where we draw our creativity. All those moments are ingredients; the smells, sights, sounds and senses we’ve collected over years. And every now and then, like a pinhole through a drawn curtain of a dark room, an idea pierces into the light and we are in the moment of creativity just waiting for the photons to overflow. Love your thoughts Lori and I’m feeling much better because of them. Namyh |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Namyh, Thank you so much for responding to this poem. It is not my usual fare. That it made you feel better is more than I could hope to ask. You have no idea how much this affirmation means to me right now. ~L |
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