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I could have sleep
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I could have sleep |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
I could have sleep tonight, and others If your eyes have never teased me in L.A, If I has never dream of kissing your lemon lips, I could have sleep like a snake in a deserted palace, If I has never felt like a rose in my hands. I could have sleep, sugar If I could stop thinking of you, but you burnt all my sweet nights forever, Now I can’t… |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
Constant thoughts or desires are like that...Sometimes they just won't rest and we don't either. As always enjoyed Yann  Huggerz |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks a lot Alanna, it sounds to me like an obsession, a vital one, yann |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Sounds like a bad case of the love sick blues Yann. Several good lines here, hard to pick a favorite. I really like the first one. ~L note: you mixed up a couple "has" and "had". |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
You are right LOri, love sick is appropriate, thanks yann |
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