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2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea

0 posted 2019-02-16 08:37 PM


I too much thought of you,
I need to listen to birds,
Humming birds, quarelling ones,
I too much thought of you,
I need to get down the mountain,
I dried up The Rio Grande
And The Colorado,
For thinking too much of you.

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BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
1 posted 2019-02-19 11:15 PM


Yes it is a rude  awakening when we have invested so much and get so little in return.  All for nothing.  I like your bitter sweetness islander.
Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
2 posted 2019-02-22 09:11 PM


Avery thoughtful poem, yann.

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