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While I Sleep
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While I Sleep |
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mirandakay12 New Member Posts 1 |
my innermost thoughts consumed this feeling cannot exist my ordinary replaced by you our hearts, an unusual twist overtaken by happiness an emotion unknown my heart belongs to you passion fills my soul the sun falling downwards when the moon and stars rise I am waiting for the chance to finally close my eyes you are my once in a lifetime this is a secret, I keep forever waiting to see you in my dreams, sound asleep. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
mirandakay12, You have captured the essence of new love. Well done! Welcome to the Big Blue Buffet, as I like to call it. ~L |
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augustsky Senior Member Posts 828 midwest US |
Mirandakay, Romantic & starry-eyed is this, what a Wonderful feeling it can be. Nicely done, & Welcome.. Sky~ ~Don't Quit Your Day Dream~ |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Dreamy poetry, and then some. Welcome to the blue sea, mirandakay. |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Mirandakay...Really liked this poem. Hope too read more from you...Paul |
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soul drifter Senior Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 711Colorado |
Nicely done and welcome to pip |
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