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Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417
In The Mirror

0 posted 2019-01-30 01:25 AM



Lover, last night
I dreamed you were a Picasso
and I was a Matisse
We were hanging on opposite gallery walls
of intersecting gallery halls
I saw us being separated

You by a parade of clicking heels
and I…by voyeuristic eyes
Your every angle was so stark,
so severe, as peering through fragmented tears
quietly begging for my tranquility
and offering me only your madness…

When I awoke, I was the Picasso
and you were the Matisse
Thank goodness the gal eerie's Van Gogh's past,
I may have woke up in the back of it
at the fish market
...as a Pollack!






...just bein' Bluesy

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
1 posted 2019-01-30 04:37 AM


You're so funny Bluesy!

  and creative, what a unique perspective. (even if the ending did seem a little fishy)
~L

Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417
In The Mirror
2 posted 2019-01-31 12:21 PM


A good pun never gets past you, Miss Lori!

Thanks a lot!

...just bein' Bluesy

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