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Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417
In The Mirror

0 posted 2019-01-29 02:55 PM



You are as the deepening twilight lover,
just beyond the day’s gentle sunset
There’s a blue moon rising baby,
our lover’s moon

Galaxies dance through a star-swept sky,
a lovely reason for me to write to you
to be with you now and in times to come,
with all darkness of our pasts forgotten

Drink deeply from our well of love my darling,
for it shall never run dry, and love me always
Like the stars, clouds, wind, and the Summer rains,
my love for you remains as perennial as the grass

...on God’s green earth

...just bein' Bluesy

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
1 posted 2019-01-29 05:09 PM


Yeah Buddy,Bluesy!
If you can walk the walk (ie.put the seat down) as good as you can write the talk. And I believe you do. You are in for a whole lot of happy! ~L

Bluesy Socrateaser
Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417
In The Mirror
2 posted 2019-01-31 12:28 PM


We'll be so happy to close the doors on
this long, long, difficult journey.

Funny, the short-cut turned out to be the loooong way.

Now though, we do neither...
We do it the right way!

Many thanks, doll!

...just bein' Bluesy

Poet In Pink
Senior Member
Posts 1066
MI
3 posted 2019-02-02 12:12 PM



Sweet and romantic ~ Keep writing her poetry like this and you'll have her swooning Much enjoyed Bluesy

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