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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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0 posted 2019-01-20 04:44 AM



I wouldn’t say you’re a perfectionist
and you aren’t long on imagination.
But you know my feminine creation
better than a gynecologist.
You aren’t the most romantic of men.
You’d never be called a Casanova.
But you’ll bring me to a supernova
whenever you make love to me again.


LGR(C)1/20/19

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augustsky
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1 posted 2019-01-20 05:30 PM


Awwwwww..yessss..when they can blow your hair back.


Sky~

Bluesy Socrateaser
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2 posted 2019-01-21 01:09 AM


quote:
"But you’ll bring me to a supernova
whenever you make love to me again"
Of all the sounds in nature, those of fulfillment ring as the truest...  


...just bein' Bluesy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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3 posted 2019-01-21 03:36 AM


Sky,
Or yodel, as the case may be . ~L

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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4 posted 2019-01-21 03:39 AM


You are right Bluesy, that they do. ~L
jwesley
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5 posted 2019-01-21 09:59 AM


Beautiful piece, my friend, and hopefully the yodeling will never end.

j.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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6 posted 2019-01-22 04:25 AM


Thanks Jimmy! You and me both on the yodeling!
~L

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