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Namyh
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0 posted 2019-01-14 12:48 PM



Scorched sand sizzled hot with a blister.
Rising heat sucked the air out the day
and the motionless sun like an unblinking eye
poked bones and my brains in its way.
I buckled to my knees from exhaustion
then my face hit the sand full flat.
Without water, each breath was a dry pain hurtin’
and my blood thickened more from its lack.

A pump handle shimmered in the day’s heat
and I focused, crawling to it ‘cross the land.
Hanging there was a sign, “Go North five feet.
Dig for water in a box in the sand.”
Scratched eyes searched frantic for its pinpoint.
Charred fingers clawed the sand going deep.
As I dug with a frenzy, then I felt something hard.
Had I liquid for some tears, I would weep.

In the box, I found a bottle full of water.
“Don’t Drink” said the jug’s top sign.
“Pour half, prime the pump then wait five.
Pour the other half in, pump nine.”
I blistered in my madness for the water.
Five minutes more of thirst was too great.
I twisted off the lid and I tilted up the jug
but those words “Don’t Drink” made me wait.

After nine pumps, I fell against the handle.
Liquid sputtered then it spurted from the spout.
I was drenched and wallowed, bathed and swallowed
in water, sweet by words I rued to doubt.
And on the bottom of the bottle was a clear sign,
“Fill this bottle for the box, please do,
for the next soul searching for a Life-raft
who may have to go on Faith like you!”

Namyh


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Poet In Pink
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MI
1 posted 2019-01-14 02:07 PM


Go on faith...That says it all my friend ~ A wonderful story poem and message. Much enjoyed!
Alana

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In The Mirror
2 posted 2019-01-14 03:35 PM


quote:
"Rising heat sucked the air out the day
and the motionless sun like an unblinking eye"
I fully agree with Miss Pinky, Namyh. So many vivid images, but this early one in your poem captured desert memories.


...just bein' Bluesy

Namyh
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3 posted 2019-01-16 11:27 AM


Alana - Faith! You're right...it does kinda say it all. Always good to hear from the one and only PiP. Namyh
Namyh
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4 posted 2019-01-16 04:42 PM


Bluesy - Rising heat has indeed been known to suck the air from a desert floor as it did, in my youth, from the concrete streets of a big city baking in heat. Mighty glad and proud you enjoyed this work. Namyh
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