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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror 
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As I drift off to sleep, moonlight fades into a tiny orifice I faintly hear you telling me that you're leaving me I then begin to see the earth quake beneath your feet Granules of soil spit up at you as you take your leave of me The quaking is stronger now as the ground splits around you Watching you slide silently downward brings me such joy You left me then, consumed by earth but suddenly, your hand reaches out from the ground, out to me from your grave, to free you from death's grasp ...then I awake to feel the walls withdraw Slowly, my excited breath becomes calm You begin to stir beside me and, finally...I decide to smile  ...just bein' Bluesy |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Dearest Bluesy, How prophetic a dream. You are saving your true love's life and have been for years. And soon my friend she will be stirring next to you. You have always been together, soon you will just be closer in proximity. Then you have this lifetime to be inseparable and eternity to love each other. I'm so excited for you both. ~L |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
You're a very intuitive woman, Miss Lori, and your intuition never requires an assist from preconceived notions. Many blessings, my dear...and many thanks!  ...just bein' Bluesy |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
You never cease to amaze me, Bluesy. You are a fantastic poet! ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
That's very kind of you to say, Jerry. Be assured the feeling is mutual. Much obliged! ...just bein' Bluesy |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
This gave me the chills as I read it...Until I got down to the happy ending As always a pleasure to read from your crafty pen. |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
Aww! Thanks so much, Miss Pinky... Now, if those chills are getting the better of you, I beg your attention to the wings on either side of me.  ...just bein' Bluesy |
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