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Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2019-01-09 05:29 AM



Can not say my desire
is a raging fire
that burns every night
and all that hullabaloo.
What I know is right,
your love satisfies me
and all I want is you.
Your words may not be fancy,
but your heart is true.
Through thick and thin
I can always count on you.
You still slay my dragons
and keep my fears at bay.
I don’t need millions
to feel content
at the end of the day.
But this much is still true,
all I want is you.

LGR(C)1/9/19


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Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417
In The Mirror
1 posted 2019-01-09 01:04 PM


quote:
"You still slay my dragons
and keep my fears at bay"
Out of love first...and duty (devotion) second.

It's a 'feel good' phrase with a lot of meat, Miss Lori.

...just bein' Bluesy

LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

2 posted 2019-01-09 01:27 PM


Loved this....

Namyh
Senior Member
since 2009-01-20
Posts 988

3 posted 2019-01-09 04:54 PM


Lori - I really enjoyed this and all the wonderful forgotten moments it made erupt to the surface. Now that's entertainment! Thanks for the those memories L. Namyh
augustsky
Senior Member
Posts 828
midwest US
4 posted 2019-01-09 05:30 PM


L, This is Dear, you Know in your Knower..
it's Him all the way.

Beautifully put for your Man..

Sky~

~Don't Quit Your Day Dream~

JerryPat2
Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
5 posted 2019-01-11 04:12 PM


Lori, I strongly feel that all you want is exactly what you have.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

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