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ptime
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0 posted 2018-12-17 05:34 AM



facial recognition trial - george state on way 17.12.18

welcome to mental
but this xmas has show stoppers
lots heading to theatre central
millions drawn to be shoppers.
bill is offering invitation
so going to highlight a smalls bertie
no such thing as corruption or contamination
in bills defence its not done covertly.
right in my ground of stomping
own most brothels and can identify each ho
100% decline in romping
premises closed in lecicester square and piccadilly and soho.
have to agree with big brother  watch
but discovering poetry will be no historian
if reading now lets share a scotch
proof this technology is lawless and authoritarian.
is this a breach of privacy
thought we were free in the united kingdom
on a slope that's so icy
george not playing flawless but freedom.
poetry that's disgraceful
going to central london for a smile
civil liberties are a farcical
remember poetry for highlighting and ending up on trial.

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augustsky
Senior Member
Posts 828
midwest US
1 posted 2018-12-17 06:24 PM


ptime, Wondering if these are headlines on
current events..mixed with satirical viewpoints?  
It sort of reminds me of a Poetry-Form called a 'Cento' in which you take lines written by others & add a few words
of your own to create a different write.(giving credit to the Authors of course)
I used to do Centos with the Titles of others
Poems (might try one here) Amazing how it can come out. Anyway..sorry for the ramble,
this is Clever & Interesting.

Sky~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
2 posted 2018-12-18 04:24 AM


I never claimed to be the brightest crayon in the box...just now dawned on me where in lies my disconnect to what you are talking about. You aren't from my neck of the woods! And your nose is in the news deeper than mine by far. I can barely get past the stink of our rotten president, let alone what is going on anywhere else. I still appreciate your style and that you write current social commentary. And thanks for commenting on my poetry! ~L
ptime
Member
Posts 64

3 posted 2018-12-19 06:21 PM


thank you both for reading and commenting. these boards are all to do with give and take.  
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