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ptime
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0 posted 2018-12-16 12:56 PM



county line credit  joaquin guzman 16.12.18

easy to follow
like cats eyes travelling
drugs have no quilt or sorrow
follow this poetry for unravelling.
genius is the master mind
even if not honourable
shame to being disability blind
named in poetry makes criminal undeniable.
you continue to manipulate
pick on those that are feeble
getting rich via a poison calculate
total disregard to society with the needle.
set up heroin dens
on the community turn your back
you no they are going at it like clucking hens
to spread disease don't provide needles just crack.
very clever how organised
not bringing any credit or shine
dark humour is going to be criticised
joaquin guzman here just spilt coke setting up next county line.

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Clare Ite
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Where The Pallet Pins Play
1 posted 2018-12-27 11:21 PM


Dear P, you write of cold, hard, truths in a somewhat abstract way, but not at all obscure. Well done.  

I always have time for you...

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