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Open Poetry #50

8 star people poem puzzle

ptime
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Posts 64

0 posted 2018-12-13 01:48 PM

8 star people poem puzzle 13.12.18

thursday 13 and spinning
then down my back a chill
on green and reefer skinning
but he stopped spinning the wheel.
second one approaching
still feels like fantasy
looking down seeing constant poaching
no more faith is no more ecstasy.
the stars are beautiful
so classy and cool
village is no longer colourful
on tod as kissing no fool.
miss your fast love
never will it heal the pain
the freeek is my inspirational bruv
8 stars and my eyes did rain.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2018-12-16 05:47 AM

Ptime,
just a suggestion, if you read and commented on other poets, they might be more inclined to read and comment on you. ~L

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