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2islander2
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by the sea

0 posted 2018-12-04 09:38 PM


if the landscape bothers you,
don't make a fuss,
let it breath again like a church,
Under the great lightness of the mountains,
Don't blame birds and lemontrees,
Don't blame the fox looking at the moon,
See, quietness is more precious than gold,
a poem can teach you that, it bites me
if landscape bothers you.

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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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1 posted 2018-12-05 11:21 AM


the quietude of grace...very nicely done and felt
2islander2
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by the sea
2 posted 2018-12-05 06:03 PM


thanks Lee J, loved your comment,


yann

augustsky
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Posts 828
midwest US
3 posted 2018-12-06 12:41 PM


Yann, "quietness is more precious than gold,
a poem can teach you that"...Love that line
Poet, how true that is.

Enjoyed,
Sky~

~Don't Quit Your Day Dream~

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
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by the sea
4 posted 2018-12-08 07:27 PM


thanks Sky, this is what american people call a "punchline" i can copy that, it enhances the poem, thanks for commenting


yann

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere
5 posted 2018-12-09 05:33 AM


Yann,
your writing intrigues me. Something about the language differences comes through in you perspective that strikes me as profound. I like the way you see things. ~L

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
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Spring, Texas
6 posted 2018-12-09 01:13 PM


Wish I had said what LeeJ did; her comment so perfect.

Enjoyed my friend, as ususal . . .

j.

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