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Branch emancipation |
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EvaRoss Junior Member Posts 22 |
The confetti of autumn lays a shrine for its hostess as she's losing her cradle though some are still clinging the mirror is transient with the pond laced in crystal the hostess leans over maternally reaching but her children are tempted with ombres and ambers siennas and cinnamons for this twilight of roaming while the poets are waiting for 3 penny operas as all will be windswept with wild illustrations tsunamis of charlottes runaway sentences tumbling rumbling leaves kissing cobblestones in the calypso of night riders taking flight on the red eye at this segue of seasons while the chimes are a ringing comes the caravan of colors magical mystical [This message has been edited by EvaRoss (11-26-2018 05:53 PM).] |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Very beautiful poem, so many great lines and stunning visuals. Brava Eva, welcome to the blue sea. |
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augustsky Senior Member Posts 828 midwest US |
Eva, Yes..& I'm one of those 'windswept'Poets when it comes to Autumn. Great Poem, loved it, especially your closing stanza's. Enjoyed.. Sky~ ~Don't Quit Your Day Dream~ |
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EvaRoss Junior Member Posts 22 |
Thanks for the thoughts on my words Appreciate it Eva |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
magical indeed, such beautiful images yann |
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