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augustsky
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0 posted 2018-11-23 08:13 PM




She Believes~


She believes in him,
even if he doesn't believe in her.
Bathes in moonlight,
brushes stardust in her hair,
opalescent wings
rest their flutter,
as the solitary fairy
dreams of mortal man.

©Augustsky


~Don't Quit Your Day Dream~

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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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1 posted 2018-11-23 10:14 PM


Sad, more than anything else. Maybe if she could relinquish the stardust in her eyes. Among other things. Things might come together for them.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

kevinjtaylor
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2 posted 2018-11-24 12:25 PM


Unrequited love. Brought back my first.
Paul Wilson
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3 posted 2018-11-24 09:25 AM


augustsky...Very nicely written. I love the picture your words paint...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

augustsky
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4 posted 2018-11-25 02:57 AM


JP, *Grins*..just a little whimsical write
about what a fairy might be thinking..that's all.

Thanks for your read..

Sky~

~Don't Quit Your Day Dream~

augustsky
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5 posted 2018-11-25 02:59 AM


K, Thanks for looking in, was just a bit of
fairy-dust.

Sky~

~Don't Quit Your Day Dream~

augustsky
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6 posted 2018-11-25 03:00 AM


Paul, Thank you for your read, glad you liked
this little bit of fluff.

Sky~

~Don't Quit Your Day Dream~

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
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Spring, Texas
7 posted 2018-11-25 02:11 PM


Nice 'fluff' , my friend. Would like to see it when the 'dust' settles...

Well done.

j.

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
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8 posted 2018-11-25 05:29 PM


enjoyed this fairy, love isn't easy
yann

augustsky
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9 posted 2018-11-26 02:47 AM


lol..thank you J.

Sky~

~Don't Quit Your Day Dream~

augustsky
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10 posted 2018-11-26 02:48 AM


You're so right Yann, thank you for reading.


Sky~

~Don't Quit Your Day Dream~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
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11 posted 2018-11-26 07:14 AM


Sky!
Your fluff is so near and dear to my heart. It has been a long time since I have written about fairies. I enjoyed this more than you know! ~L

augustsky
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12 posted 2018-11-26 11:04 PM


L, That's lovely to hear, you should post one of your fairy-poems, or maybe a new one.
My daughter put my head on a fairy-pic a few yrs. back..talk about Weird looking LOL.

Thanks for the read & reply..

Sky~


~Don't Quit Your Day Dream~

[This message has been edited by augustsky (11-27-2018 09:55 PM).]

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