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ptime
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0 posted 2018-11-22 06:15 AM


vine diet 22.11.18

counting the intake
licking the lips
not all aware what is at steak
others go out to get shakira hips.
some won't click
whole life with addiction
until on nhs bed and sick
meal time and now friction.
the solution is in writing
a secret that's free
a triplet i'm inviting
only eat medium times a day three.
also good is stalking
into life is no spanner
poetry and head is forking
words are miss leading like a road planner.
into diet no poetry dropping
even if left the village shrine
controversial as news has no stopping
miss my chew but not on diet is the vine.


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2islander2
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1 posted 2018-11-24 09:28 PM


i like this, truth is in the vine sometimes, no diet means fine inspiration, with moderation of course
yann

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