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JerryPat2
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0 posted 2018-11-19 03:06 PM


you let me touch your fragile
it meant the world to me
you said you'd like to touch my eager
you'd like to hold it too
all right I said with a grin
just for a moment's fluttering
she thought she got the best of me
but I held on to my remarkable

©April 19, 2017 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

© Copyright 2018 Jerry Pat Bolton - All Rights Reserved
BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
1 posted 2018-11-19 10:16 PM


Unbelievable
augustsky
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2 posted 2018-11-20 02:42 AM


Jerrypat, *Grins* So cheeky, & clever.. it's Great!

Enjoyed..
Sky~

~Don't Quit Your Day Dream~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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3 posted 2018-11-20 05:01 AM


An oldie but a goody sir, count it as one of your best. ( of which you have very many my friend ) ~L
JerryPat2
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4 posted 2018-12-05 06:02 PM


Thanks, Sky, appreciated your comments . . .

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

JerryPat2
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5 posted 2018-12-11 02:16 PM


Appreciate you showing up, Blues.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

JerryPat2
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6 posted 2018-12-11 02:46 PM


Ooops! Almost forgot you, Lori, can't forget that.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

JerryPat2
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7 posted 2018-12-11 02:47 PM


Ooops! Almost forgot you, Lori, can't have that.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

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