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The Sweet Sublime of Sleepy
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The Sweet Sublime of Sleepy |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere 
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Sleep is a seductress of a most fickle nature. Sleepy is the spell she casts upon your eyes, making them heavy. Each blink lingers a little longer, struggling under the weight of her seduction. But come and go as she pleases, not at your convenience. Where was she at midnight last, when she was needed? She’s never welcome when driving. Since when has that ever stopped her? So strong is her magic, she has lured some to their eternal rest. Who can resist her warm soft voice whispering to our primal needs? She is the sound of the mother, heard by the infant at her breast. Sleepy, like a lullaby, lulls the body away from awareness. It cradles it in the sweet sublime of oblivion. LGR(C)11/3/18 |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
I read this twice, Miss Lori. First, just to familiarize myself with it, like all readings. The second time, however, was hypnotic. Loved this line: quote:I knew I liked you...  ...just bein' Bluesy |
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augustsky Senior Member Posts 828 midwest US |
My eyes are starting to get heavy..Sandman working his magic through your Poem.  Enjoyed.. Sky~ ~Don't Quit Your Day Dream~ |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
I SO relate to this, Lori, except that I have never needed to call her. I sleep at the drop of my head on the pillow. Sometimes I want to ponder some issues when I get into bed, but I seldom get to start, let alone get anywhere, as Sleep overcomes me. However, it is a lovely poem. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
You nailed it, my friend. Unfortunately I'm a poor sleeper in that, I have always had trouble sleeping. Best example of that is when I was in Navy boot Camp, back in 1961 - Sunday was a blessed day for all recruits - Everyone went to church because they knew they'd get a good hours worth of sleep. Not me. I was the preacher's congregation. Because I've never been able to fall asleep sitting up. The preacher loved me! My head never slumped! Anyway - great read, and on the spot! j. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
capricious sleep, yes, you have to tell that this way, sweet dreams are coming, thanks lori yann |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Nice poem. I like you also. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ [This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (11-25-2018 10:38 PM).] |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Owl, thanks for the read and popping me to the top so others read it as well. It makes me feel so good you make a point to read me when you stop in.  ~L |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Jimmy, So sorry to hear of your troubles with my favorite hobby. Thank you so much for reading and commenting, I always look forward to hearing from you! ~L |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Yann, Always good to hear from you too! I'm happy I write poems that you can understand and relate to. You always write the nicest compliments. ~L |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Thanks Jerry, I like you too! |
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