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kudanesh
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since 2007-12-01
Posts 135
Peterborough,England

0 posted 2018-10-12 04:44 AM


Muddy Work

The truth is muddy work,
people much prefer the lie.
They say only truth is sufficed,
but when its heard they cry.

They fall foul to there own feelings,
blame others for their pain.
Inform your self of reality,
rejoin the world again.

© Copyright 2018 Andrew Hull - All Rights Reserved
Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
1 posted 2018-10-13 07:24 AM


You tell it like it is and it is like fresh air through an opened window, Write on! ~L
JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
2 posted 2018-11-19 02:16 PM


I'm a people, and I much prefer the truth.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
3 posted 2018-11-19 10:21 PM


Very very cool poetry.  There are so many takes to take away.  

Brava good poet!!

augustsky
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Posts 828
midwest US
4 posted 2018-11-20 02:06 AM


K, Good insight, Good read..

Sky~

~Don't Quit Your Day Dream~

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