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2islander2
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0 posted 2018-09-29 09:45 PM



Spices or diamonds, her eyes intimidate me. O Slowness.
Gentle slaves.

Epices ou diamants, ses yeux m'intimident.
O lenteurs. Gentils esclaves

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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1 posted 2018-10-01 11:11 AM


Way cool Yann!

"Gentle slaves"-love it! ~L

JerryPat2
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2 posted 2018-10-03 05:41 PM


Sorry, I cannot come to terms with "O Slowness.Gentle slaves."

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

JerryPat2
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3 posted 2018-10-03 05:44 PM


Sorry, but I am ubable to come to terms with,  "O Slowness. Gentle slaves"

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

2islander2
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4 posted 2018-10-03 06:06 PM


let you seek Jerry, I know you are an excellent poet….Just imagine

yann

jwesley
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5 posted 2018-10-25 05:55 PM


Definitely with Jerry on this one - "O Slowness.Gentle slaves." eludes me too.  In fact I'm no idea what-so-ever.

Enjoyed, though puzzled (couldn't find ref. to it on web either) . . .

j

2islander2
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6 posted 2018-10-25 08:25 PM


i owe you that, this is about intimate, eyes are such a mirror, and slowness  is a way to perform, i must confess this is a very personnal foul, you have to read this, like a succesion of free sentences, i try to help myself

have a nice day


yann

Marchmadness
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7 posted 2019-02-23 03:31 AM


Enchanting, yann.

bbynams
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8 posted 2019-03-29 09:56 AM


I like weird poetry like this. Enjoyed it! French is one of the languages I heard a lot, but can't speak a word of it myself. Very cool.
bbynams
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9 posted 2019-03-29 10:05 AM


I also think you should consider titling it "Curves"
2islander2
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10 posted 2019-03-31 07:54 PM


thanks a lot bbynams, this is cool to read you, all your comments, as you can notice the site is very quiet, whatever i was happy to read you, thanks a lot


yann

Sunshine
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11 posted 2019-04-07 09:49 AM


The replies are as interesting as the poem, Yann.

My first take was that of being enveloped in honey.

Poet In Pink
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12 posted 2019-04-08 06:42 PM



~Yann~
One of the things I love about your poetry is that I can read it and if I don't fully understand your personal thoughts on the piece...I can interpret it with my own thoughts that apply to me.
Huggerz
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