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metaphor about wolves

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

0 posted 2018-09-26 06:16 PM

It's time to shoot down wolves, preposterous books,
To walk around the snow,
It's time to arm oneself,
To cross over the rivers of the Big North, to fire in the desert
On the dark animals, to attach clouds.
It's time to shoot down wolves, to banish them from Our dreams,
let us clinch our rifles, let us open our windows, the powder shivers,
Big haloes rise towards the sky, writing our birth.

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

1 posted 2018-10-17 03:55 PM

First thought . . . Wow!

Second, and other thoughts . . . Wow!

'nuff said.

j.

augustsky
Senior Member
Posts 828
midwest US

2 posted 2018-11-20 01:10 PM

Metaphors powerful here..

Sky~

~Don't Quit Your Day Dream~

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

3 posted 2018-11-20 04:43 PM

thanks a lot jw, this is very nice and kind
yann

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

4 posted 2018-11-20 04:44 PM

thanks sky, i am glad metaphors work

yann

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