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2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea

0 posted 2018-09-12 07:24 PM


J’ai essayé de la comprendre,
Et j’ai eu tort. Ma vie s’enfuie.
Les roses l’ennuyaient en septembre,
Mon cœur aussi.

Les roses l’ennuyaient en Septembre,
Mon cœur aussi.
Elle était comme l’horizon,
Les tristes horloges disent non, non, non.

J’ai peur de la comprendre,
Elle  dit non,  ai-je tort ?
Les roses s’ennuient en Septembre.
Le présent  toujours  est mort.


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I tried to understand her,
I was totally wrong. My life escaped.
Roses bored her in September,
My heart, too.


Roses bored her, in September,
My heart, too.
She looked like some horizon
Grim horloges say no, no, no.


I am scared to understand her,
she say NO, am I wrong ?
Roses are boring in September,
present has died again.

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
1 posted 2018-09-13 04:59 AM


Yann,
I think some people, women especially, can be near to impossible to understand. They may be intriguing but best left alone as they will drive you insane.
I really like your line
  "Roses bored her, in September"
  ~L

2islander2
Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
2 posted 2018-09-13 01:55 PM


thanks Lori, i listen your words carefully, a woman knows that stuff better than a man, so precious is this comment, thanks


yann

jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
3 posted 2018-09-16 11:47 AM


Enjoyed this, my friend - so right!
I thought being married might change some of the "women!" thingys, but after all these years I think it has only exacerbated them!

They're beyond us mortal men.

j.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
4 posted 2018-09-26 07:28 PM


Lori has it right.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

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