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2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
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by the sea

0 posted 2018-08-31 12:55 PM


I stopped in the countryside,
She was silent,
u met someone jogging, I asked
Where are birds?
I do not know, I run

Then the mailman arrived,
I asked,
Do you know where are birds?
I do not know, I bring the mail.

Then I asked the baker
Did you see birds?
No, my job is to make some bread.

Finally, I saw a roguish scientist,
I asked, Where are birds?
I do not know, I invent pesticides.

Then, I smiled,
We shall hear no more birds,
Only the poet knows why,
I believe that they sang by love.

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
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1 posted 2018-09-01 04:39 AM


Oh Yann,
I really relate to this. I was just thinking yesterday about how important poets and artists are in giving voice to what is wrong in the world and sounding the alarm. ("Where are the birds") because we understand there is a deeper meaning. (..."they sang by love").
These days, politics move me every bit as much as a thunder storm or sun set can. I feel I will explode if I don't write about it. ~L

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
2 posted 2018-09-03 12:41 PM


thanks lori, what you say is very important, and i think very now, that of species disapear, man will follow surely , your comment comfort me that way
have  good week

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

3 posted 2018-09-03 12:37 PM


these days they are not as brightly inspired with moral intellect as was years ago.


Paul Wilson
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4 posted 2018-09-05 01:48 PM


Yann...Indeed where are the birds? I have some in my yard nesting in a tree close by a window where they sing to me every morning.

My dentist has a big picture window in the exam room where I can watch them uninterrupted they just fly back and forth from a feeder to a bird bath, I love watching them...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

Poet In Pink
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MI
5 posted 2018-09-06 02:18 AM


You have penned it perfectly Yann....So much of what we love seems to be becoming extinct ~ If man keeps destroying everything...shall we not perish too?  A sad and scary thought. Thank you for sharing your wise words   Enjoyed my read
jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
6 posted 2018-09-07 11:33 PM


Much enjoyed this my friend, and it's truths.

When I first moved to my present house, 35 or so years ago, I personally logged 6o some species of bird in or over (I've never had a vulture actually land on my property, for instance, but circle above it, yes) my yard.

Now, some 30 years later, so far, including migrating species, I've counted 19, this year.

Some I know are due changing migration habits; many habitat depletion by growing "concrete jungle", trees being cut down, and so forth.  Much due pesticides, and of course, cats, and more cats.

I miss the birds, and we as a world will miss them in so many ways when their gone.

Enjoyed.

j.

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
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So. El Monte, California
7 posted 2018-11-18 03:22 AM


Makes me sad.

OwlSA
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since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
8 posted 2018-11-18 05:40 PM


Très triste, Yann et magnifiquement et poétiquement exprimé.
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