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Open Poetry #50
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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere
0 posted 2018-08-31 04:51 AM



In this current climate change
seeds have been planted.
Seeds of discord and division
have germinated in soil
fertilized with ignorance.
Sprouts flourishing
along this path
bloom
shades of dictatorship.
The stench of the blossoms
smothers the Constitution
while the green vines upwards
and those upwind
find the flowers lovely.

LGR(C)8/31/18
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2islander2
Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
1 posted 2018-08-31 12:59 PM

this is finely critical, i love that way, only way of telling the truth, and it is very well written, thanks Lori
yann
Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
2 posted 2018-09-01 04:42 AM

Thank you Yann,
You give great compliments. It means a lot to me that you validate my truth. ~L
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