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2islander2
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0 posted 2018-08-28 08:40 PM


The moon has a walk;
as my solitary soul
Only the city clears her iron heart.
She hangs on to a hat, an umbrella,
Do not hurry up,
she will come back tomorrow,
With new words and more happiness

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Paul Wilson
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1 posted 2018-08-28 10:22 PM


Yann...Enjoyed very much. Last night driving home the Moon was so full and bright. Makes me wonder how magical this world of ours is...Paul

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Paul

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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2 posted 2018-08-30 05:09 AM


Well done Yann!
You always make me look at things a little differently. ~L

2islander2
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3 posted 2018-08-30 09:22 PM


thanks Paul, for looking moon that way, we need that kind of stuff for improving our lives and other ones by ricochet, your words comfort me that way


yann

2islander2
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4 posted 2018-08-30 09:23 PM


thanks lori, this is a compliment i simply appreciate


yann

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