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jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

0 posted 2018-08-08 11:43 PM



Just Beyond Twilight

There . . .
Sunshine’s gone,
it’s just beyond twilight,
vision is at it’s worst,
the eyes haven’t quite
recovered from light’s glare,
night vision
hasn’t quite set in,
and yet –
there are subdued shadows
if one looks, movement, and
screams, if one listens,
brushing against ones skin,
could be the wind,
but too solid,
almost a push,
and then, stars push
through the dark,
city lights
come into focus,
half-a- moon is above
the trees,
night time sounds
are what one hears,
animals and people
of the night
are what one sees,
but always, always,
there’s that feeling,
that touch,
that screaming,
lurking, waiting,

for the unwary.




© wesley james beard, jr.



© Copyright 2018 Wesley James Beard, Jr. - All Rights Reserved
Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
1 posted 2018-08-09 03:41 AM


Nice Jimmy!
Yes there is that about that time of not quite day or night, thanks for putting your finger on it. ~L

Clare Ite
Member
Posts 66
Where The Pallet Pins Play
2 posted 2018-08-09 08:34 PM


Confidence and capability conquer fear, dear Wesley. Few that possess them are caught unaware.

I always have time for you...

2islander2
Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
3 posted 2018-08-09 10:14 PM


very nice, jimmy, full vivid details are appreciated, and so alive, loved a lot
JerryPat2
Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
4 posted 2018-08-10 03:59 PM


You captured the absolute imagery and essence of the evening’s twilight within your excellent wordplay, Jimmy. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

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