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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
i wish, i could drink sometimes, i could open some fortunate door, forget evil and the bad feelings, but i can't, cause of my disease. Il wish, i could travel far away, look at girls naked in the woods, forget the work and the lame but i can't cause of my disease. my life is not a so quiet river, i have floods and sins of floods, let me hope this girl take care, I wish i could drown by her dreams. |
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Clare Ite Member Posts 66 Where The Pallet Pins Play |
Wanting is a powerful disease left unattended, dear yann. I like your poetry very much. Hee Haw I always have time for you... |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks clare, for the kind comment, i appreciate the "wanting" you mentioned, this is so true yann |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Yeah, my friend, if, when, you figure it out let me know - lot of "stuff" I'd like to "clear" also. Great piece - really enjoyed it. jimmy |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Yann, Another great one. I love the last stanza. ~L |
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