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Open Poetry #50

wen things work

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

0 posted 2018-07-13 03:50 PM

Mary does not like when things work,
When they hum as cats In baskets of clean linen,
When the looks insist and want more than some chocolate,
But they want rather your skin of fox,
O trappers, you have so much chance at the heart of the abbatial forests,
you are not murdered, when you like the color Of the orange or the lemon,
Mary does not like when things work,
you are pushed towards the holiness, because love frightens,
A blue fear, as an infinite sea.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2018-07-14 05:37 AM

Yann,
I absolutely LOVE this line:
"When they hum as cats In baskets of clean linen," ~L

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

2 posted 2018-07-14 10:44 PM

I like all of it, but especially the line Lori mentioned - and I don't like cats!

j.

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

3 posted 2018-07-15 04:39 PM

thanks lori, i guess you have cats around you, enjoy that
yann

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

4 posted 2018-07-15 04:41 PM

thanks j wesley, cats let no one indifferent, specially in some situation
yann

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