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0 posted 2018-07-13 01:04 PM



Ain’t no change that I can’t handle,

Been livin through this grind day in and out,

Had nough now, about to explode,

Watch out for the fall out,

Don’t get caught up in this madness,

Like a hurricane, blowing through your mind,

Leaving nothing, but misery in the aftermath,

Been around since before your first breath,

Don’t care about you all,

Gots to do what is right,

For my fam, and not care for the rest,

Loyal to my lady and my dog,

The rest can just take it somewhere else,

For I don’t care, just trying to get my share,

Fear none, and do what’s right,

Enough with this sentiment ish,

Let out the raw voice, don’t care who it hurts,

You woken up a resting mad man,

Try to strike me, but won’t work now,

Too late to reason with this hell hound,

It’s all emotional, no logic behind it now.

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

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1 posted 2018-07-13 03:58 PM


hi xeonox, very strong sentiments are born here, when we have to struggle against people or fate, the poem deliver precisely this mood so uneasy , excellent share ro recall how we can feel, thanks

yann

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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2 posted 2018-07-14 05:33 AM


You have really captured and given voice to the rage of frustration. I think you speak for many people. Great write! ~L
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