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Lie to Me
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Lie to Me |
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soul drifter Senior Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 711Colorado |
Lie To Me Take this love rattling round in a heart smooth out all the imperfections or tear it all apart I've got my down sides and oh I know that you do too when we thought it over there was nothing we could do When there's no dreams left to dream and no easy way out to see lie to me and tell me you still love me So take this love and the shape of a heart redefine every ugly truth and make a new start I've been knocked around yeah I've got my scars I've crawled for your love but I never got very far I've had some sweet love and oh I know that you have too when I look back now I was such a happy fool When there's no dreams left to dream and no easy way out to see lie to me and tell me you still love me And there's no words left to say we've said it all yesterday lie to me and tell me that you'll stay Take this love rattling round in a heart live with all the imperfections or tear it all apart "Peace is more than the absence of war" -- Prince |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
this could be a good lie, love the demanding poem, full of true emotions have a good day yann |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
soul Drifter...Enjoyed the power in this. Sounds like it was a hard write for you. Take Care my friend...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Wow! Really tough stuff! Hard to read because I been there. ~L |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
heartfelt write/right, would make a very lovely country western song.... we've all been there, for sure.... well done. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Even if they lie to us we will accept it for the truth . . . Just please stay. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
I feel your words...the truth of them has been born within my own heart...Very touching read SD ~ Thank you for sharing. Alana |
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Clare Ite Member Posts 66 Where The Pallet Pins Play |
Beautiful and heartfelt, dear Zach. I always have time for you... |
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