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Waiting on the Rain
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Waiting on the Rain |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere 
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The thunder rumbled low and tempting like a woman’s voice on a sultry night. The skies were heavy and full of their impending release. The wind held its breath in anticipation. Birds chirped away like ladies at an ice cream social. We all waited for the rain. LGR(C)7/8/18 |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
i love the images, Lori, the va et vient between thunder and women, this is very creative and suggestive yann |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Thanks Yann, I was trying it from a different angle. I seem to have written a lot about rain and storms and was looking for something I hadn't already said. ~L |
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