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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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South Louisiana

0 posted 2018-05-28 10:53 AM


freedom is for the asking
as you gaze unfettered
toward the sunset
or a moon’s arising
you can most certainly
realize that within your thoughts
it can disappear
as quickly
as the blink of the eye
of course
it really doesn’t
disappear that quickly
It merely seems that it does
because my friend
freedom like this poem
can be short
but not so well informed

©May 25, 2018 /  Jerry Pat Bolton


~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
1 posted 2018-05-29 12:33 PM


Freedom is most definitely a state of mind.
~L

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
2 posted 2018-05-29 01:48 PM


Yup, it is that, but a welcoming state of mind for the most part. Thank you, Lori.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

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