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Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2018-05-13 08:01 AM




On this Mother’s Day
I’m missing my mom,
even though,
I see her every Sunday.
If I’m lucky she’ll wake up
and maybe say a word or two.
I’m blessed she still
knows who I am.
I miss making her laugh
and telling her stories.
I miss her reaction
when I read her my poems.
It has been hard to watch
her fade like old photographs do.
I can’t help but look at her
and think of myself
and wonder if that will be me.
I worry when I can’t remember
or my hands get too shaky.
I miss being able to tell her
and having her,
in no uncertain terms,
tell me just exactly
what I should do about it.

© Copyright 2018 Lori Grosser Rhoden - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2018-05-15 02:26 PM


She would most likely tell you to just go with the flow. Can't stop it, that's a darn fact, can we.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
2 posted 2018-05-15 05:47 PM


Ha! Probably so!
For a while there she was on a kick where it seemed like her cure for everything was eat more broccolli  ~L

JerryPat2
Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
3 posted 2018-05-15 06:04 PM


Who knows, maybe it was a good thing for her, all that broccoli.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
4 posted 2018-05-17 06:19 PM


Very touching, Lori.  I am sure she would love it as the other poems before, if only she could.  Despite everything, you are very lucky indeed.  
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