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JerryPat2
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South Louisiana

0 posted 2018-05-03 11:12 AM


The Swamp


I was not born
in the swamps of Louisiana
at least I do not think I was
however there is a photo of infant me
taken, I was told, in Golden Meadow
in a stroller
dad  was supposedly working offshore
anyway a swamp is different from people
like me, who come to live here
in the cities raised from a boggy swamp
swamp is used as a figure of speech
by us
but when a true Cajun
speaks of the swamp it is with great
pride for having lived
his whole life there
grew up listening to
tales of the pirates which raced
up and down the bayous
squeezed in by trees leaning over the bayou
where the sky was often thwarted
by the overlapping of said trees
as they sailed along, stopping only
to steal and kill
not noticing the gorgeous scene before them
stunning flowers of all kinds
and an old gators eyes above the water
to keep their own eyes alert
within the mire of the swamp
huge Cypress trees stood like Satan himself
the swamp
was alit with a rowdiness
and still is in some respect
outsiders can never grasp
the closeness of those of the swamp
and tales of  Marie Laveau

©May 3, 2018 / Jerry Pat Bolton



~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

[This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (05-03-2018 11:59 AM).]

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Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417
In The Mirror
1 posted 2018-05-03 12:38 PM


That the swamps of Louisiana are the stuff of legends, is a certainty...
But the dangers that lurk within it are quite real.

I enjoyed reading this of yours, Jerry.
Keep your toes in the boat!

(...and to think they make such a fuss over the Everglades!}


...just bein' Bluesy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
2 posted 2018-05-03 02:26 PM


Your State and the swamp in particular has a color and vibrancy all its own and the people are just as unique. ~L
JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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South Louisiana
3 posted 2018-05-03 07:03 PM


The difference, Blusey, in the Everglades and the swamps of Louisiana is its people. Whereas the Everglades promoted themselves, the Cajuns of south Louisiana really don't care much for outsiders.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

[This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (05-03-2018 07:34 PM).]

JerryPat2
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South Louisiana
4 posted 2018-05-03 07:07 PM


I agree, Lori. I first came to south Louisiana on my Senior trip. Fell in love with it, and still do.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

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