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Bluesy Socrateaser
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In The Mirror

0 posted 2018-05-03 12:19 PM


Perhaps, my love, when we are found, bravely, yet so happily weeping
I will be allowed the keeping, when you my love, are softly sleeping...

Just know this loyal heart inside my battered soul is leaping

My love is pure, not some faded vain alloy
Lover, I promise only truth to employ...

As I hold you close my darling girl,
...with all my love, your faithful boy

...just bein' Bluesy

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere
1 posted 2018-05-03 04:51 AM


Faithful. That is an understatement. You put the Saints to shame. You may not be perfect but your devotion is undeniable and outstanding.  ~L
JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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South Louisiana
2 posted 2018-05-03 10:04 AM


A perfect poem of never-ending love in my opinion.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
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by the sea
3 posted 2018-05-03 10:25 AM


a true love, a genuine one, so cute,


yann


Bluesy Socrateaser
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In The Mirror
4 posted 2018-05-03 12:29 PM


Thank you so much, Miss Lori.

...just bein' Bluesy

Bluesy Socrateaser
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5 posted 2018-05-03 12:30 PM


I greatly appreciate your comments, Jerry. Thanks so much!

...just bein' Bluesy

Bluesy Socrateaser
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6 posted 2018-05-03 12:30 PM


Thank you, yann.

...just bein' Bluesy

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