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2islander2
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by the sea

0 posted 2018-05-02 08:18 AM



Do not speak to the cat of your loves,
He would laugh,
A sprig of lily-of-the-valley hangs on the window,
Undecided.


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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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1 posted 2018-05-02 07:16 PM


Yann,
I have read this several times and the more I do the more I like it. It makes sense to me in a very disjointed yet syncopated way. Like Jazz makes sense. cool  ~L

Bluesy Socrateaser
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In The Mirror
2 posted 2018-05-02 07:35 PM


I agree.

...just bein' Bluesy

2islander2
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3 posted 2018-05-03 10:27 AM


Thanks LOri, the comment is like a lovely jazz song that touched me,


yann

2islander2
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4 posted 2018-05-03 10:28 AM


Thanks bluesy


yann



jwesley
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5 posted 2018-05-07 09:03 PM


Yeah, me too, my friend. But then, I don't speak to cats at all . . .lol

j.

2islander2
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6 posted 2018-05-09 10:57 AM


thanks jwesley , i guess you do for the best, nice to read you

yann

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