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Bluesy Socrateaser
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In The Mirror

0 posted 2018-04-26 02:47 AM


Following veined trails
In leaves that fall to my feet
Leading me to her

...just bein' Bluesy

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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1 posted 2018-04-26 04:27 AM


Do you mind if I call this perfect? ~L
JerryPat2
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2 posted 2018-04-26 10:05 AM


Throughout all of your poetry with "her" as the centerpiece you are always finding ways to follow to her welcoming arms. Great writing.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Bluesy Socrateaser
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3 posted 2018-04-26 12:15 PM


Aww...Ain't 'cha sweet now!

Much obliged, Miss Lori.


...just bein' Bluesy

Bluesy Socrateaser
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4 posted 2018-04-26 12:16 PM


Thank you so much, Jerry. It's 'great' to have you back!

...just bein' Bluesy

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