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Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07
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In The Mirror

0 posted 2018-04-25 10:55 PM


I swear I didn’t see a single sign
but when I looked I couldn’t believe my eyes
She came right at me crossing the yellow lines
and took me totally by surprise

She and I colliding like two cannon balls,
the impact made us rock and reel,
Now after making so many calls
we lay here surrounded by cold steel

We failed to keep our distance well
You could say it was meant
But baby I’d rather be in hell
Than to have my bumper bent...


...just bein' Bluesy

[This message has been edited by Bluesy Socrateaser (04-26-2018 02:22 AM).]

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
1 posted 2018-04-26 04:33 AM


Wrecks are the worst. They usually leave some residue in your mind that makes you a little sensitive. I know I will never look at that overpass I totaled my 4runner on, the same ever again. (especially in winter) ~L
JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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South Louisiana
2 posted 2018-04-26 10:08 AM


I relate also. I totaled my car out about three months ago.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07
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In The Mirror
3 posted 2018-04-26 11:33 AM


Sure sounds like a 'wreck'...doesn't it?

I remember your 'ice-capade' experience, Miss Lori.  

...just bein' Bluesy

Bluesy Socrateaser
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In The Mirror
4 posted 2018-04-26 12:09 PM


Sorry to hear about your car, Jerry.

Better it than you though...right?  

...just bein' Bluesy

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