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Bluesy Socrateaser
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0 posted 2018-04-19 05:29 PM


A taste of iron
Like biting nails forever
Locked in time and light

Bound fast bone with bone.
Jaws seem welded together
Voice fades forever

From the stilled bedroom
They melt like two icicles
Pools of sorrows formed


...just bein' Bluesy

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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1 posted 2018-04-19 09:14 PM


Pretty heavy duty there Bluesy. Your last line is especially er..ah...touching. And as always kick-ass creative.
Bluesy Socrateaser
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2 posted 2018-04-19 09:32 PM


Hmm. Er...um, thanks, Miss Lori.

Hmm.

...just bein' Bluesy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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3 posted 2018-04-20 04:39 AM


Poignant was the word I was looking for, but was having trouble spelling. Now I gots it. Had to write it on a document and let spell check fix it. (I forgot about the g). ~L

Bluesy Socrateaser
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4 posted 2018-04-20 12:01 PM


I was just having fun with you, my dear.

I'm glad you pointed out "poignant", too. I was going to offer "Peugeot"...until I found out it was a car.   

...just bein' Bluesy

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