The Rape Of My Secluded Lagoon: A Cacophony Of Closing Costs...

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Open Poetry #50

The Rape Of My Secluded Lagoon: A Cacophony Of Closing Costs...

Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

0 posted 2018-04-12 11:34 PM

My eyes were wide
at 'lover's' tide,
my hands clasped in a fervent plea

My lips were wet,
though were not met,
for our love was yet to be

But oh, what I saw,
along that lovely shore
Such a beautiful pearl of trust

‘Twas ground to sell,
as the cliches fell,
...and my hopes then turned to dust

...just bein' Bluesy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2018-04-13 05:32 AM

If I read this right, sounds like you missed out. Like I have said, Kay Sarah Sarah. If I read it wrong, then congrats. ~L

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2018-04-13 09:18 AM

Oh, yes I guess by all means you must stay away from all those clichés. They have wrecked many a love interest.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

3 posted 2018-04-13 12:08 PM

Actually, it was about a beautiful beach in Laguna that had become "unreal estate" some time ago. What a pity.

...just bein' Bluesy

Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

4 posted 2018-04-13 12:10 PM

"They have wrecked many a love interest".

Yes indeed, Jerry. I loved the beach cove in Laguna.

...just bein' Bluesy

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2018-04-18 12:15 PM

nice...james

Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

6 posted 2018-04-18 12:48 PM

Thanks, James.

...just bein' Bluesy

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