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Her Muzzle Velocity Was Excessive: But She Was Way Too Cool To Lose...

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Bluesy Socrateaser
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0 posted 03-04-2018 03:33 PM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

Shots in the dark
aimed at a heart
that just isn't there

A fool and her gun,
thinks she's having fun
at the expense of the bullet


...just bein' Bluesy

[This message has been edited by Bluesy Socrateaser (03-04-2018 04:18 PM).]

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JerryPat2
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1 posted 03-04-2018 04:05 PM       View Profile for JerryPat2   Email JerryPat2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit JerryPat2's Home Page   View IP for JerryPat2

I loved this short, but very expressive poetry. Get the gist of your thouhts and stop already.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Bluesy Socrateaser
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Thanks, Jerry...'preciate your comments.

...just bein' Bluesy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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I think I resemble that remark Bluesy, but I ain't admitin' to nothin' cuz...ah ...well ....you  know. ~L
Bluesy Socrateaser
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4 posted 03-05-2018 01:01 AM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

Ah! Takin' the 'fifth' on me, eh?

Good girl!

...just bein' Bluesy

 
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