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The Tease

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Spring gave us a tease.
She whispered warm to please.
She shimmered in sunny delight.
Winter doldrums were set to flight.
The wind was with her as always,
blowing birds and bees different ways.
And following behind was a little rain,
just enough to wet the window pane.
Spring gave us a taste we want to linger.
but it will take a month to bring her
to stay every day.

LGR(C)2/28/18
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Bluesy Socrateaser
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1 posted 02-28-2018 11:35 AM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Email Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

This was skillfully penned, Miss Lori.
You're not only a keen Kansas observer, but you interpret and translate your surroundings with the beauty of an Audobon painting.

Superb!
Spring? Bring it on!

...just bein' Bluesy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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2 posted 02-28-2018 11:38 AM       View Profile for Lori Grosser Rhoden   Email Lori Grosser Rhoden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lori Grosser Rhoden

Why thank you so much kind sir. My nature poems do have a tendency to be my better work. ~L
Bluesy Socrateaser
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3 posted 02-28-2018 12:44 PM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Email Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

quote:
"My nature poems do have a tendency to be my better work"
Perhaps that's because it's what's outside that's coming in on a breeze that you process better and then send back out in words than it is what's inside that's being processed and metered according to one inhibition or another, some of which is no one elses' beeswax, finally finding its way to the outside.


...Maybe

Pay no attention to this, Miss Lori, unless you're really bored. Then just read it as fast as you can several times over.

...just bein' Bluesy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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4 posted 02-28-2018 01:09 PM       View Profile for Lori Grosser Rhoden   Email Lori Grosser Rhoden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lori Grosser Rhoden

I'm not bored I'm busy as the dickens but it sure made for a nice break. ~L
JamesMichael
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nice...james
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Thanks James! ~L
Poet In Pink
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Love this Lori Lou!!!  A delightful read from start to finish Always enjoy your poetry sweet friend!
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Pinkypeep!
Thank you! Hugs, hugs, hugs! ~L
 
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