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Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07
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In The Mirror

0 posted 2018-02-26 12:46 PM


In the darkened evening...
the firelight’s glow illuminates tears

Lightly depressing fingertips
search across the net for silent wishes

Then, a light enters my body
guiding patterns, forming words

Strange, surrounding images blurred from view,
act as sentries guarding ‘The Shimmering One’

Like a diamond in a sea of broken glass,
her faceted brilliance enchants me so

A reluctance to be known,
yet leading me to seek the winds

Our captive thoughts now set free
to whirl and flail about...

Two silk ribbons entangled in love
...Never to be untied

Now through all our storms my love,
comes the beginning of eternity for you and I

...just bein' Bluesy

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
1 posted 2018-02-26 04:55 AM


What wonderful thoughts to have and to hold of the two of you. The depth and openness of your devotion is inspiring. Every line is laced with the pain of separation. Your strength of character is a constant. ~L
Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417
In The Mirror
2 posted 2018-02-27 03:29 AM


She and I have waited for a very long time for this year, 2018, Miss Lori.
It's amazing how cautious I've become.

Thanks for your sweet sentiments.

...just bein' Bluesy

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