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Bluesy Socrateaser
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0 posted 2018-02-24 12:03 PM


Lift your veil my dear sweet Linny
Envelope me in your radiant light
You know me in all your ways my lovely
Leave me not this orphaned night

I’d spill my blood for you, dear Linny
I’d rest among sweet flow’rs of the dead
Scarlet spirits would writhe in rhythms
Painting patterns upon our bed

Reach then in my heart, sweet Linny
Find all my words for you are true
I know you in my way, dear Linny
I pledge my undying love to you

...just bein' Bluesy

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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1 posted 2018-02-24 02:54 AM


Are you two going to write your own vows? That really would be something.Weddings are exciting even if you elope. No matter what you choose to do, it will be perfect. ~L
Bluesy Socrateaser
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2 posted 2018-02-24 06:22 AM


"Vows?" Vows are in my every breath, Miss Lori.

...just bein' Bluesy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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3 posted 2018-02-24 07:01 AM


Truer words were never spoke my friend. I'm assuming you dodged the wedding question because the answer isn't up to you and it is none of my bees wax. ~L
Bluesy Socrateaser
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4 posted 2018-02-24 11:11 AM


None of your beeswax? Come, come now, Miss Lori, you and I are better than "beeswax"!  

My 'honey' and I have 'yessed' ourselves literally hundreds of times since we've been apart. It's something we should have taken seriously years ago,
Maybe we'd have done things differently and not caused so much heartache and pain for others as well as ourselves...but it is what it is and it was as it was.

Now, it's on to the "I do's".     


...just bein' Bluesy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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5 posted 2018-02-24 01:19 PM


Yes I know you better than bees wax. That's why when you wouldn't tell me if you were going to write your vows I knew what you really had in mind but was trying to keep it on the down low.  I won't spill the beans about you two going to Vegas and the Elvis impersonator at the drive through. It'll be just between us. ~L
Bluesy Socrateaser
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6 posted 2018-02-24 05:43 PM


I knew I liked you!

...just bein' Bluesy

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