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Just to Hold Him Close

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 10-10-2009
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Fair to middlin'


0 posted 02-20-2018 05:20 AM       View Profile for Lori Grosser Rhoden   Email Lori Grosser Rhoden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lori Grosser Rhoden


With a piece of paper
and a pen full of his heart,
he writes to her.
He sends her his love
in ways that make her smile
and dream of their future together.
The everyday things he tells her
lets her know home is ready
and waiting for her light to fill it.
His love is constant
as the air she breathes.
His desire for her
still catches her breath.
She hugs each envelope
to her breast,
just to hold him close.

LGR(C)2/20/20


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jwesley
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since 04-30-2000
Posts 7274
Spring, Texas


1 posted 02-20-2018 04:27 PM       View Profile for jwesley   Email jwesley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jwesley

Outstanding, my friend.  One of your best!
Very much enjoyed.  You definitely nailed this one!

Jimmy
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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2 posted 02-20-2018 04:39 PM       View Profile for Lori Grosser Rhoden   Email Lori Grosser Rhoden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lori Grosser Rhoden

Thanks Jimmy! I'm glad you liked it. It is always good to hear from you. ~L
Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 11-07-2002
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In The Mirror


3 posted 02-21-2018 12:41 AM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

Each line is as factual as if I'd written myself.
Few could know the depth and dimension
well enough to write as you do, Miss Lori.

You how much I appreciate you, don't you.   

...just bein' Bluesy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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4 posted 02-21-2018 05:04 AM       View Profile for Lori Grosser Rhoden   Email Lori Grosser Rhoden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lori Grosser Rhoden

Awe shucks Bluesy,
You make it so easy. You have already painted the picture with all your poems. I just write  'em as I sees 'em. ~L
 
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